Frost!
All night the spiders wove.
With dewy vines hanging down
from the tree their web sits in.
We calve handprints on the tops of tables.
Plus our fingers go numb because of the bleakness.
The webs of spiders add to trees with their beauty!
Also the leaves drop on flocks as white as goats.
Kia ora Isabel, I love the imagery you painted with words. Where did you get your photo from? Is it original? One thing I can show you is how to make your words bigger in your post.. Keep up the fabulous writing. from Mrs Torrie
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Kia ora Isabel,
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery you painted with words.
Where did you get your photo from? Is it original?
One thing I can show you is how to make your words bigger in your post..
Keep up the fabulous writing.
from
Mrs Torrie
Hi Mrs Torrie
DeleteI got this photo from outside the classroom. Plus I've already lernt how to make my words bigger!