Thursday, 4 July 2019

Slow Writing

We are lerning how to do slow writing here is mine...

Bats
Did you know that bats bones are hollow?
Above, their claws hang onto branches.
Claws Clinging.
Eyesight in the dark like cats.
Juicy fat fruit, they like to eat.
Gently snuggling into themselves.
Batty wide eyes.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Izzy,
    Great descriptive words! You did a really good job on this piece of writing! I didn't know that bats have hollow bones, that's very interesting! Did you know that bats use echolocation to find their way around dark caves?
    Once again amazing work!!

    -Liana

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  2. I didn't know that and Thank you!

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